She smiled silently and returned to the canvas before. It show cased brilliant colors, the deep ones and the intense ones, just like her eyes. Deep brown eyes that shone on you till you were fully captivated by their simple innocence, the silent eyes yet adorned with brilliance so obvious it could strike you for a moment. He moved nearer.
"You don't believe me baby girl?" He said in her ear. "Here, let me show you." He came up behind her and held the hand she was painting with, the other one holding on to the rest of her possessively. Softly, he led her hand in circle as if designing a core. Deep red, deep orange, sharp yellow in an attempt to capture a passionate sun, choosing colors for her.
"I'll paint you baby" he whispered. "And I'll paint you exactly how you are to me." She laughed softly.
"You don't believe me?" He mocked an expression that complained you-don't-believe-me?
"You know what girl? I want you to know something... There were many that I have met and spent time with. But there was this one gal whom I have never met. But she had this lovely heart that reached out to me and captured my soul, let alone that calmness in her face. Had things been different, I would have gone all the way with her and lived all my life with her. She is an amazing woman. She is, and hopefully to me atleast. She would always be... my Sunshine."
A peck on her cheek and she simply smiled.
his Sunshine... :)
ReplyDeleteI like that... if you ask me... he is a lucky guy to have her sunshine... :)
this is so very beautiful :)
ReplyDeletethat was an amazing write up.. full of passion n tenderness.
ReplyDeletekeep writing :-)
i like this post suchi mai!!
ReplyDeletethis so is the mushy dose of my day.
ReplyDeletemwahhh!!
M for mUshy, M for Mehreen.
bravo me :D
very very lovely
ReplyDeletegod bless u
by d way....u getting sunshine der???
its monsoon here
dampness everywhere
a sweet post by sweet sunshine :)
ReplyDeleteThats a bright post by Ms.Sunshine.
ReplyDeleteILU!
Hi Mehreen :-) I was away from blogging for a while...so was not able to visit... Hope ur fine and doing great!
ReplyDeleteThe post was sweet and wonderful! And am happy to read your *sunshine stories* after long time.
Take care!
Aww...
ReplyDeleteand I just hope that this was not fiction (:
Stay the same.. The Sunshine of his life!!
Sunny sunshiney write-up! LOVELY.
ReplyDeletebtw I myself am too busy to blog these days Sunshine girl. I hvnt been in Blogville all that much. TC :)
Keshi.
that is such a sweet post...very well written and beautifully expressed...
ReplyDeletekeep writing
god bless!
Wow, this is intriguing! What's happening here? Who was the guy talking about if not her?
ReplyDeleteAnd she wasn't surprised, she smiled?
Let the sunshine stay forever.... :)
ReplyDeleteHappy for you..Somewhere I have this feeling,yeh tho aapke story hee hain.. :P ;)
Take care sis.. :)
Nikhil
Sunshine in the true sense!!i love such posts. :)
ReplyDeleteSalaams Mehreen
ReplyDeleteBeen a long time since I visited you...it has been a busy month or so for me...howhaveyoubeen??????
That was a beautiful post, the last one was good too.
"Ill paint you baby" He whispered. "And i'll paint you exactly how you are to me."
ReplyDeleteO man loved this line:)
@ arv
ReplyDeletehiiii... yesh... lucky indeed ;)
thank you so much amal :)
ReplyDeletethanks Richa :)
ReplyDeletethank you UB :))
ReplyDelete@ AD
ReplyDeletearay wah... M for mushy and M for mehreen :D
bravo you! :P :D
thanks sweety!
thanks Ani :)
ReplyDelete@ the geekie
ReplyDeletehey hi.... thanks for the read :)
no monsoon here yaar... it's still so hot :(
ILU tooooo Crystal :)
ReplyDeletemwah!
thanks Mani :) it's great to see you here again :)
ReplyDeletehey Meera, so nice of you to drop by :)
ReplyDeletethank you, thank youuuu :) mwah!
hey shrutiiiiii
ReplyDeletehow are you girl? hey i'll catch u up on fb :P
thanks for the read (wishes :P)
thank you so much Parzi :)
ReplyDeletethanks Ria :))
ReplyDelete@ Rakesh
ReplyDeletehe was talking about HER :D
she wasn't surprised cz she knew him well :P
Mehreen,
ReplyDeleteNice one. Hope it has a happy ending.
No reply in previous post?
Take care
awwe, sunshine is radiating so much of happiness on me :P luv ya swts :) u take care!!
ReplyDeletethat was touching..
ReplyDeletebeautiful!! :)
simply sweet !!
ReplyDeleteps: guess you changed your blog template .. i used to read you long time back too!
Beautiful post... :)
ReplyDeleteसमस्त bloger holder हरुमा मेरो शुभकामना धेरै राम्रो artical हरु छ यहाँ , धेरै भन्दा धेरै नेपाली साहित्य लाई माया गरेको मा पनि गर्भ लाग्छ ।
ReplyDelete"Beautifully defined"
ReplyDeletelove+sweet+surrender
Many Thanks :)
thanks Sadiya
ReplyDeleteiv been busy too... it's weekend and im in office :(
thank youuuuu nikhil :)
ReplyDeletethanks priyanshu :)
ReplyDelete@ sawan
ReplyDeletehehe.... that made me giggle :)
how r u
hi jack
ReplyDeleteyea.... been so busy... will do it soon :)
how r u?
thanks for visitng!
thanks Saad :)
ReplyDeletehey lost mermaid :)
ReplyDeletethanks for liking it.... im honored to know you have been reading me for such a long time
thank you! :)
@ Qi
ReplyDeletelots of love to you baby!
@ nepal
ReplyDeletei didn't get it... plz post comments in english!
thanks Harshita :)
ReplyDelete@ push vs pull
ReplyDeletethanks for dropping by and appreciating my write -up :)
Oh how beautiful painted post. Very sweet story, so pleasant to the heart. Anna :)
ReplyDeletethat explains ur blogger name :P
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