My eyes lit up as he swayed me to the music. In a split second, I discovered the fire in me, lighting up my very existence, with dreams, new possibilites, a new flair... He held my hand softly, and I felt like a painter's masterpiece. It was how I knew arts; art always came from a place within you that was the purest. And it came to you as a gift, something that you not define, but only express, in various forms. He made me feel like a piece of art. I felt like a thousand colors, all bright and beautiful, captivating, mesmerizing, enchanting. The colors that spoke to me each day, I was one of them now; a dazzling red one moment, a soothing blue the other, gentle as white, a sophisticated pink the other, yellow with a tinge of orange like the bright sun, a seductive black, a peaceful green the other... I laughed, and the sound of my laughter broke into a thousand little pieces that he said were like music to his ears, dancing around us, making the rhythms stronger, the air more dreamy. I suddenly knew passion with innocence, the distance that came with being close, knowing yourself completely for a moment, losing yourself to someone the other.
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First posted on Chronicles of a Drama Queen
on August 28th, 09.
Thank God! You danced at last. I am glad you did, girl. I would have paid to watch you dance.
ReplyDelete*smiles*
The person you love is the luckiest in this world :)-No other words for your master writing :)
ReplyDeleteI loved the post - it remained me of the time when I first tapped my feets with her :)
ReplyDeleteby the way ...
today my blog completes one year - pls do drop by and comment on it if ul get time @ http://19goes20.blogspot.com
Short and sweet..!!
ReplyDeleteCould feel romance oozing from the lines
Beautiful and sweet!!!
ReplyDeleteAm happy for you Mehreen :-)
from the heart shows always. wonderfully composed!
ReplyDeleteGod! How do I even start and tell you how wonderful this is...
ReplyDelete"I lauhed, and the sound of my laughter broke into a thousand little pieces that he said were like music to his ears..."
Simply Brilliant!
wow beautifully written mehreen...btw belated eid wishes..sorry been busy...where are my "sevaaiaan's ;)...
ReplyDeletehey ur marraige ain't far away is it..feeling the jitters ??...chalo koi naii...sevaiyaan tab khaa lenge :D :D
@ sib
ReplyDeletehey thanks! yea i danced like no one was watching :P
@ pulkit
ReplyDeletewow... congrats mate! will pay a visit surely :)
awww thanks Aditya!
ReplyDeletei hope he's lucky enough :)
thanks mani :)
ReplyDeletehow are you?
thanks ki :)
ReplyDeletethanks for reading illeen. how have you been girl?
ReplyDeletethanks a lot AD :)
ReplyDeletethanks Anurag.... yea the jitters are hsaking me up real good :D
ReplyDeletehan han kha lena tum sivayyaan :P ill keep ur share hehe
thank you Rakesh :)
ReplyDeleteglad you liked it!
Superb... Simply wonderful...
ReplyDelete:)
Mehreen,
ReplyDeleteLove in the air? Bud about to bloom. Very nice description.
Take care
i like it i like it!!
ReplyDeletesweet :)
ReplyDeletereally loved it
that was really sweet...i must say that u r really a great writer, its not possible to find words for all you feel, but u have done that and that too very beautifully crafted...
ReplyDeletei m simply falling in love with your writings...keep on going..m waiting.
So beautiful, Mehreen :-)
ReplyDeleteMesmerising, Sunshine :)
ReplyDeleteaww....that was so so romantic. :)
ReplyDeleteOne of the most romantic pieces that I ever read! Very beautiful!
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